June 2008
4 posts
Nothing is ever bright
“Darkness” is a really great poem. I like this poem because it relates to what I’m feeling. The darkness is a scary place to be, it has no light and you can’t see where your going.
“I have nowhere to go, nothing to see” This is a saying that means I have nobody to talk to and nobody there for me and nowhere to go I’m all alone that’s what this line...
RESPONSE TO DANIELLE 5TH GRADER, MISSOURI
“Abandoned” is a deep and hard feeling poem. When it says: “The pain to be abandoned hurts” this line is real hard. Its saying is so deep that it makes you think about people out in the world that feel that way. They think they’re all alone in the world and have to survive on their own. They’re mostly living life and trying not to die.
“You will have to...
Response to Patricia
I like Patricia’s poem, “Love, Life, Love and Live,” because it’s deep and the words are strong.
“Love is the grestest and worst” That part is so true becauses love is like that. Love has it good moments and its bad. That’s a part of love.
“Love and life wont tell you where to go or what to do” That is true because you control your own life...
Angel
When I frist saw him, I already knew there was something inside of him. He was an angel of mine. I’m going to love him all my life. How he changed my world, I’ll never know. He filled that big empyt space in my heart. I love this kid so much. There’s nobody like him. What he means to me ,you’ll never know, but deep inside I need to show. I only share my world with him, and...
May 2008
3 posts
5.21.08
today im goning to my after school program in my building. im gonna have fun because my besty nick-nasty is goning 2 see hes boo mizzbeauty and imma see my boo head of 980 yeah boy…lol
My Friend
I cared about my boyfriend, they call him ”Head Of 980”. Me and him going throught some problems right now. I dont know what to do i love him so much but i cant talk to him.
After School Blast
Only thing on my mind is after school. Qfter school im goin to have a blast, Im going to chill and hang out with my friend they call FliiBre. She’s so cool then after, Im going to hang out with my boyfriend I can’t stop thinking about this having fun after school
February 2008
1 post
Darfur(Africa)
Darfur Darfur is in Africa People have been burned People are providing medical things and other stuff 30,000 people might have been displaced Children are being abandoned Peace keepers protected people Since 2003 they has been a lot of violence Rebellion broke out in 2003 200,000 have died 2.5 million were driven from their homes 20,000 have died...