Miriam at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

10/06/2008

Response to Patricia

I like Patricia’s poem, “Love, Life, Love and Live,” because it’s deep and the words are strong.

“Love is the grestest and worst” That part is so true becauses love is like that. Love has it good moments and its bad. That’s a part of love.

“Love and life wont tell you where to go or what to do” That is true because you control your own life and love, nobody else but you, love can’t tell you what to do and it can’t tell you where to go, but it can help you. Life can’t tell you what to do but it can lead you where to go.

“You can’t escape it all” This part is so true because people can’t handle it and try to leave and run away from the truth and facing it, but instead they run like a baby. You can escape life and live because its part of your destiny, don’t run and hide. Face it and deal with it. Overcpme the hard challenges.